I made several changes to my final project. Compared with my previous draft this one has subheadings and all the images have captions. In addition, I edited the topographic map of Moldova to include the two main rivers and the basic locations, which I am mentioning in my project. Finally, at the bottom of the second and third pages there is a series of maps, which show the changing of borders. See you all on Thursday!
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Great improvements! Thought, if you haven’t already spent a day at Kinkos printing this out, I would stretch the captions a bit more across the image and not indent them at times. The NSD map of the river has a much better context with the added illustrations.
Thanks! Unfortunately I printed it out. By the way, you can place an online order and it will be ready in 3 hours. So, you do not need to spend a day at Kinkos.
Oh yes. I printed it out no problem. In and out as they say. I was just being humorous.
[...] week I commented on Alex’s final [...]
Alex, this project is great, I really enjoyed reading your history. Each time that I had a question about “so what?” or “what does that tell us?” you answered it in either the next sentence or the next paragraph. Well done!
I do have a few comments about formatting with regards to the project:
1) I think your margins might be off. It could be because I’m viewing it t/ a computer interface but they seemed small. I had that problem last week.
2) I think the subtitles throughout the work should have each word capitalized, instead of just the first word. You do this on page 4 and I think it looks best.
3) The captions for the images are not all formatted the same way. Some have indents for the first sentence and others do not. I think the ones without indents look best.
Again, really great job! I thought your project read excellently and the fact that my only comments were on the formatting speaks to your well done historical work!
Thanks, Lindsey! I hope this will work well with my dissertation!